Descriptive Writing Exercise

1She was depressed.
I noticed a woman who was in her late fourtys. The woman was wearing all black. The woman had her head all the way down. her body seem to droop as if life was sucked right out of her chest and abdamens. Also the elder lady walked really slow as if all her energy had been tooken from her from a long work out. The lady seemed to have no motivation to do anything. She seemed hopelesswith no strength left in her body, mind, or spirit.
2The car was nice
The dark blue, black, and energy red Hummer second edition was a very nice looking car. In the inside of the car it was very luxuriuos and had high tech technolog. The inside was black and had sections of white as if it was so sophisticated. The hummer had two sets of twelve hundred watt subwoofers in the back that made the ground move like an earthquake. The Hummer was capable of going six hundred miles per hour or faster. The Hummer although always seemed to be missing something.